Monday, December 7, 2009

Searching Eyes Comments

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They mirror you to the world, they are glossy,
like two tiny saucers with emotions spilled on them,
i see a search in them, a restlessness.....are happy but not satisfied,
always searching......searching for something you know not.
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rinki nandy
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Rakesh Bedi 07 December 2009

i dont know; your poem has confused me.....what are your eyes searching for, rinki? ? ? Of course, it is a very deftly scripted poem. But, dear, the metaphor is not clear...to me at least.....

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