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The sky is raining teardrops-
Although the sky is a deep shade of cerulean blue-
The mountains reflect the color of the sky, and as
The sun is trying to rise above mountains of uncertainty-
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Vipins Puthooran 19 February 2012

I fear the world, inside which I could soon be drowning in a river of tears, But I keep walking that pathway that I fear could be leading to nowhere ******* Fear, mysteries, strong determination all I can see in this wonderful poem...... An excellent flow from line to lines.....top marks! ! !

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Claudia Krizay

Claudia Krizay

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