Monday, July 9, 2012

Search Of Light Comments

Rating: 3.2

I
I will search for the light
In the midst of dark night

From the mortal world
To the ocean of plight
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mohit soni
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Kasia Fedyk 15 July 2012

Very beautiful poem Mohit, in search for the light, yes and I see the light in you shining bright sometimes we feel darkness has overtaken us only lessons for us to search deeper within for the light! I love your poem very much, it is beautiful and pure truth.

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Jawad Al Harake 10 July 2012

Really nice one, I liked it, it is small but very expressing, nice one! ! !

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Babatunde Aremu 10 July 2012

Great poem. The end rhyme makes the poem a delight to read. The use of searching for the light in solitude, barren fields demonstrates the resolve. Keeping searching for the light

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Ramesh T A 10 July 2012

Nice composition to read! It is interesting to read from the beginning to the last! Ending is very good!

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Faith Fimano 09 July 2012

I liked this one I would of never been able to think of anything like this...If you have read any of my poems you'd understand :) I think you diserve more comments then you have.Keep writing my friend.

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Rachel Streek 09 July 2012

Really like this poem and the words you use

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