Search Of Light Comments

Rhythmically light and lilting poem, would love to see more description, I think it would be beneficial. Repetition is not always a good idea. Thank you for sharing, RoseAnn

A lyrical poem as if the poet was singing it....it dims down towards the end.

A fine songlike poem i liked. D search for light is always beneficial poet bro.

tnx for the comment.actually i write it as a lyrics of a gong thats its looking some odd

Good Try. But you can improve on your poetic skills. Keep writing! Takecare.