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A brilliant poem that emanates from a sober mind... great! !

Robert, Thank you for seeing the dark night of the soul and not chastising me for having one. Some feel Christians cannot feel these. Robert, You are welcome and you earned each of my comments.

Whoa! ! ! ! ! Smoky! What a stunningly beautiful thing to say to another poet- -you just gave me a serious jolt of encouragement just when I needed it too! ! !

Rebecca! ! ! ! You light up Poem Hunters with your heart-light and love of poetry- -may you remain a PH as long as there are poets thriving here,

Had to come back and read this wonderful poem again. Very moving.

Kierkegaard (from deep experience) wrote of the dark night of the soul, there seems to be no way around it, only through it, to the other side, where light, one hopes, does reside. Stunningly wonderful poem Susan; very moving, especially for those among us who've experienced such as this... Thank you for sharing it.

Such sadness in this! .. When I pray and wish you such happiness! .. A deeply heart touching song beautifully sewn! .. Very powerfully expressed! .. 5 Stars +++++++++..............

I am so glad to read this comment, Khairul, you understand completely where this poem comes from- a very repentant soul... thank you for understanding this. You make a writer feel less alone when you respond this way

'repair my story' - an ardent prayer, soulful and touching! I am touched by the tone of repentence, which is pristine and pure. Such a prayer cannot go unanswered. A pleasure to read and recite, and to realise the course of redemption, when we want a correction in the course of our actions.

Yes! Yes! ! Yes! ! ! Unnikrishnan! ! ! ! ! ! This is the second time I have stumbled over my dear dear friend's comment. I visited your wall to see a poem that was new since obviously you are back- -but could find none. so I shall content myself with an epic I have yet to read! ! ! ! Thank you for the awesome honor you have given me by reading one of my efforts!

What a nice thing to say... Thank you, Cowboy. I normally at end rhymes but love playing with inner rhyming

Suresh! ! ! What a comforting thing to say! Thank you, poet. I appreciate kindness!

You are not An allegory But a reality. Beautiful, Blessed. No need To repair. It's automatic dear Susan.

Excellent poem! Love the creative rhyme pattern you have used here!

It is my soulful cry I beg thee, repair my story..... This is what everyone has to beseech, in hindsight....

Good idea. I think most poems just might be the product of people getting to know themselves deeper and deeper. Thank you, Mahtab, for reading and commenting on my poetry efforts. I am grateful for your decision to use precious time on reading the poems of others.

I see your name and I start getting happy cuz you are such a cheerful member of PH. Thank you, Jez. I always look forward to reading your enthusiastic comments. You put sparkles in my day! And not only mine!

it's a poem of knowing thyself- I think

O my origin come into me open your wholeness express thyself before my perceptible knowledge show me thyself truly and lead me to true myself......

Yiyan! ! ! ! ! Ouch! ! ! But you are right. Some of us do not respond to anything gentler! Thank you for reading this and commenting, Yiyan! ! !