Search For Freedom Comments

its was so beautiful :) i really liked it-i hope you get to make more as you grow and flourish Regards, Afrodita

I like it! :) Keep it up! Your good.. :) Sorry it took me a while, havent been on for a long time.. :)

i really liked this poem but a lil type for you is not to try so hard to make everything flow because then it doesnt sound as good if you just write how you feel and what you want then rough draft it make little changes then you will have something grande..

Destiny's game our fate lies......lovely vivid piece with fine rhymes........10

It really shows how destiny finds a way. i love it

Loved the beat, like a heart. Fits perfectly with the words!

This Poem... Is Extraordinary! I Loved It! ! .. So Amazing! .. Touching! ... The Feelings are Moving.. Wonderful 10+! Maya.

a very good one. I liked every line and description you draw. keep it up.

Nice poem, It's really a deeply described poem, and it does tell the reader what you feel without treding too deep. Wonderful poem! C.C.M

beautiful, wonderful, amazing, touching, fantastic, &&&&..............

great poem, , , , , like it so much voted 10++ thx for charring

Very unique poem you have written here. I love everything about it. ~ Hazel G.E

really beautiful 10++++++++++

I can really tell what you wanted to say about freedom. That we're all loking for it. very nice and also liked the rhyme

your poem made my day a little better.it shows us how we all should search for freedom.

Freedom is an attire to humanity…many has died for it and will continue to die for it. thank you...

Well written, your tone is so convincing, the words naturally rhyme and they smoothly flow. Absolute simplicity is your way to achieve perfection. Well done once again.

I think the theme of the sea worked well for you Blue Eyes. Nice rhythm and rhyme as well. Well done! Karin

Nice rhythm to the poem and well expressed. Thanks for sharing.

'... freedom... and accordingly i died... ' beautiful...