Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
Friday, June 6, 2014

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Rating: 5.0

It is as usual
I find it casual
Heart is beating as normal
I am perfectly human animal
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
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Colleen Courtney 09 June 2014

A beautifully written poem on how to a certain degree we really have no control over when our final day on this earth will be. All the more reason to be sure to live each day to the fullest and hold close and treasure the momentswith those we love. Nicely done Mehta!

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welcome lena bass ford n shujat ahmed June 6 at 9: 50pm · Unlike · 1

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OK, but disjointed Diane Baril42 minutes ago Lot's of emotion, but a little difficult to follow. Could be a little less disjointed.

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very deep, not insightful but overall depicted a very vivid visual Alexandra Carames42 minutes ago wording was a little off, but there was a very powerful flow Comment 0

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It is as usual I find it casual

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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