Kim Barney

Kim Barney

I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit
Kim Barney
I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit
Thursday, January 1, 2015

Seal Pup Cinquain Comments

Rating: 4.8

Seal pup
Color of snow
Camouflage will not be
Enough to fool the nose of great
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Tom Billsborough 02 May 2016

good poem fine picture. another 10 Tom Billsborough

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Rajesh Thankappan 09 January 2015

Bear has a great sense of smell and so indeed the camouflage won't work out for the seal pup. Liked it.

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Grace Jessen 02 January 2015

This is a very nice cinquain!

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Kim Barney

Kim Barney

I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit
Kim Barney
I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit
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