Thursday, January 14, 2016

Seagulls - Haiku Comments

Rating: 5.0

Silent groan
Sliced Dawns horizon
Seagulls vertical dive
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Seema Jayaraman
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jeffrey star 07 July 2020

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 28 July 2016

Silent groan Sliced Dawns horizon Seagulls vertical dive Beautiful haiku on a Seagull, a bird I loved most in my teens, after I read Jonathan Livingstone Seagull. Thanks poetess for the sharing. 10 marks for it. Subhas

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Kumarmani Mahakul 14 January 2016

Very wise, interesting and amazing haiku on bird and sea.10

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Seema Jayaraman 14 January 2016

Thank you Kumarmaniji, yes the birds are great source of inspiration, today I spotted Flamingoes from Airoli bridge, wish I could upload the photos

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