Saturday, July 25, 2015

Seagulls, And Paper Jet Plane Comments

Rating: 4.5

When I saw the seagulls hovering over the cerulean sky
My heart was on wings roaming with the birds so high

This feeling was seemingly in a game back to my childhood
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Cigeng Zhang
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Terry Craddock 18 February 2017

there is always dreams of flying in happy healthy childhood minds, we are meant to soar in freedom skies in beautiful places, in imagination places within our minds we should always leap into freedom imagination flight

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Christopher Tye 19 October 2016

Really lovely poem, so well thought out. Paper airplanes are so much fun to make and fly, it's amazing what you can make from scraps of old paper.

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Abdulrazak Aralimatti 18 September 2015

Truly, the poem reminds the reader of his childhood and provides its charm Loved reading and commenting

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Kwai Chee Low 25 July 2015

Beautiful piece. Nostalgic and brings back childhood memories. Seagulls and paper planes flying free! Thank you for sharing, Cigeng.

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