Saturday, May 24, 2014

Seagulls And Cheetos Comments

Rating: 5.0

I walked along the shoreline leaving footprints in the sand,
munching on some Cheetos that I held within my hand.
A single seagull up above was keeping up with me,
and when I looked again, the single seagull turned to three.
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Lisa Doesburg
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Darlene Walsh 28 May 2014

This was very fun to read, I've enjoyed all of your poems so far, and I have many more to read :)

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Sandra Feldman 25 May 2014

Amazing poem, so musical and descriptive.! ! I could see it and hear it. I laughed and smiled, something poetry seldom does to the reader. Thank you so much for this delightful experience. You are very talented! S.

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Bill Cantrell 24 May 2014

I love these kinds of poems, they rhyme with fun and are full of life, good job! , If you would like to..read my poem, The fiddler Crab

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Chuy Amante 24 May 2014

I love this poem and Cheetos! In Poetry and Cheetos are my only two vices! A+++

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