Monday, May 29, 2023

Seagulls Comments

Rating: 3.0

The dusky eve in country meads
In rainy weather rainy day
All trees were standing stony still
While kids in street with boats they play
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Eden Verse
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M. Asim Nehal 30 May 2023

A highly captivating verse, as we witness the seagull gliding and emitting a resonant noise, crooning a melody of affection albeit quite boisterous to our hearing. I deem it extremely enthralling to observe their aerial maneuvers. Another splendid poem indeed.5*****

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Sabahat Batool 30 May 2023

Thanks Asim Nehal so nice of you. No doubt they breathe with the breathes of nature and same is the case of poetry. It breathes with nature but we can never ever depict the beauty of Nature, but we can try

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