Saturday, February 20, 2016

Seagull Comments

Rating: 5.0

A seagull feels as if wrapped up by blue.
Color of sky is smeared on its wings
Sea hue covers the reverse side.
Where is the source of blue fountain?
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Sumit Ganguly
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Tom Billsborough 25 April 2016

Now Sumit before I answered your comment on my poem, I thought it best to check out your Seagull poem first. Your poem encloses me in its spell as the seagul's search encloses it. It is a most rapturous poem with a very fine rhythm. At the very least, a ten. I share the feelings your poem expresses. Thank you for drawing my attention to it. Tom Billsborough

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Ratnakar Mandlik 21 February 2016

Amazing poem penned with fantastic imagery that elaborates the searches undertaken by Seagull, one by one. Thanks for sharing.10 points.

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