Sea-Woman Awake On A Sleeping Shore Comments

I was wondering where did you vanish :) - sunk into the sea-woman's eyes and poems and the wind still repeats your name Naseer Naseer :) . Very romantic piece...

ah! she is deeper than the ocean.....!

a nother read..beautifulllllllllllllllllll

deep thoughts about the beauty in her...10++++

Vision is the art of seeing the invisible, it takes love, insight and reverence to connect to someone at such a deep level. simple in expression, but very deep in thought. Actually I WILL LOVE TO READ THE ORIGINAL IN URDU. What an enchanting title, like a fairt tale. it makes me feel as if I didn't get the essence of it. Mamta

As a poet your thoughts are the deepest as deep as any ocean

Simple, yet universal; we all feel the stings and caresses of life with immense clarity. I think most can relate to the hyperbole related here. Great play of words, Naseer! Warm regards, John.

Sea woman is deeper than any woman!

Short, sweet, and absolutely breathtaking

your poem is deeper then mine blve me

A very lovely poem speaking of how wonderful someone is wether its inadamite or alive. (Of couse in my religion everything is alive)

The title is lovely, I am jealous I didn't create it :)

Obviously a writing of deep admiration of a special woman. Whether real or not, it does not matter. The essence of the piece is the admiration. While I cannot declare the meanings of your poems to be clear. The quality of your structure and your approach to poetry is such that there is a beauty in each presentation and there are no wasted words. You are a writer of quality. GW62

i liked it but the other ones are better

wonderful poem Naseer well done thanks a lot

Unique write, captivating too, well done, 10 Lynda xx

Different, short, but very good.

Interestin nice flow good write

a poetic genius par excellence!

A pen portrait of a very extraordinary woman. Beautiful title. 10 without hesitation. Kind regards, Sandra