Friday, January 11, 2008

Sea We(Ë/Ð) Ding Comments

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I smelt the sea
(fish, salt and rut
under the indigo sky)
her blue canopy
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babitha marina justin
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I liked this poem, because it really involved the senses. It put you into the scene. Nice write.

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Kee Thampi 22 January 2008

The falsify of the dreamy poet made a convulse in my eye.... ''I.. was not human nor a mermaid but a whirlpool yawning wide to steal my life and merge with the ever expanding sea. '' however it makes me to love it...

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