Sea To The Moon Comments

If nature could have a fleeting moment of interaction with itself, this poem does narrate it.

Magic of nature: Moon is source of inspiration, source of love and resource for poets......I liked the way you thought and wrote this amusing poem.....Loved it..

Part 2 Let me quote I don’t want to lose This moment of chaos That negates the space Between us And let’s love be a force.... Wonderfully rendered...100+++

Hi Nosheen, Beautiful poem on love. True, love is such force that is capable of drawing the lovers close to one another, however far separated they are....

How sad to think that the moon may sail and peer between buildings at people too busy to spy the wonder. Finding an audience finally unobstructed over the sea for those fortunate dreamers or to accompany a wayward traveler along some otherwise darkened highway. There are the lucky few bewitched, they surrender to the ancient mystery and hear the silent charmer's song.

Wonderful poem, there is a connection between the moon and sea in poetry, great meter

A magnificent nature write that captures the wonders and beauty of the sea and moon. Their wonders hold us spellbound. Beautifully crafted and well executed. Liked the picture that goes with this poem. It enhanced the beauty of this marvelous piece of art.10+++++

a superb ending, the poem very faithfully delineates the innermost thought of a great poetess. thanks for sharing.

The innocence and attraction of nature given its due.

Silent dreamer dreams with love and hope. Gravity is a silent charmer of course. Between love and force mind fluctuates and joy comes with beauty of hope and light. An excellent poem is amazingly penned...10

You have displayed true inner emotions...well done