Friday, October 14, 2005

Sea Sickness Comments

Rating: 2.6

We went out fishing in a boat,
Charlie, Wal and me.
As it was cold, we wore a coat,
Fishing on the sea.
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George Savige
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Douglas Scotney 29 January 2016

apparently if you're as bad as he you can't get worse from sickness of the sea

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Godfrey Morris 29 January 2016

Awesome write. Enjoyed reading it made me laugh. Very consistent rhythm.

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Kim Barney 29 January 2016

Humorous poem, George. I enjoyed it. Kind of the same rhythm as 'The Owl and the Pussycat'. I see that you haven't submitted anything to this site for almost three years. I hope you are still around and healthy and will get to see all these nice comments people are leaving. Congratulations on having this poem selected as poem of the day!

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Jayatissa K. Liyanage 29 January 2016

A very touching scene, wonderfully painted using simple but appropriate words, on a poetic canvass.

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Elena Plotkin 29 January 2016

Very amusing. Very well written.

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Edward Kofi Louis 29 January 2016

At sea with the muse of love. Thanks for sharing.

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Rajnish Manga 29 January 2016

As sweet as a nursery rhyme. Enjoyed the narrative and lovely rhymes in the poem. Thanks, George.

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Robert E Hann 29 November 2006

George, Loved the poem. Would love to share my fishing poems with you. Robert Hann

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George Savige

George Savige

Moe Victoria Australia
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