We went out fishing in a boat,
Charlie, Wal and me.
As it was cold, we wore a coat,
Fishing on the sea.
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Awesome write. Enjoyed reading it made me laugh. Very consistent rhythm.
Humorous poem, George. I enjoyed it. Kind of the same rhythm as 'The Owl and the Pussycat'. I see that you haven't submitted anything to this site for almost three years. I hope you are still around and healthy and will get to see all these nice comments people are leaving. Congratulations on having this poem selected as poem of the day!
A very touching scene, wonderfully painted using simple but appropriate words, on a poetic canvass.
As sweet as a nursery rhyme. Enjoyed the narrative and lovely rhymes in the poem. Thanks, George.
George, Loved the poem. Would love to share my fishing poems with you. Robert Hann
apparently if you're as bad as he you can't get worse from sickness of the sea