Sea Shore And The Pebbles Comments
Walking along the sea shore
Seagulls flying off the shore
The Wind is singing a new song
The cool breeze and the smell of salt
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Great poem, Rini! I have just been at the sea and love it so much. I actually picked up some pebbles and brought them home for a friend, but they lose their sparkle as soon as they're out of the sea, right?
Everything lose is beauty when removed from its original environment.. Pebbles needs water and sunlight to get the sparks.. And so you and me need our loved ones around us to get the sparks from within.
Walking along the sea shore! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
Yes. A wonderful feeling to be out on the beach. It's surreal. Thank you for reminding me of summer days. :)
beautiful description of loveliness........ sea, sand, sunset, pebbles, hand, feet, sensuous. dev
I found a heart touching depiction on sea shore and pebbles refers to life's enjoyment.The last lines are more attractive... Engulfed by the roaring waves Touched by the deepest floors Eroded by the scary turbulence The pebbles traveled miles and miles Reached out and touched my soles. Thank u dear Rini for posting such a gem.
Reading this delightful poem takes a person there. The imagery is wonderful.
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The Wind is singing a new song The cool breeze and the smell of salt These are like the running commentaries of salty wind fingering through the hairs..you render a fresh sea-bath to your reader, free of cost and free of tiresome journey. Thanks Rini for this lovely poem. 10++
Thanks subhas, every time I read this poem I feel as if i am on the sea shore