Monday, April 21, 2008

Sea Serpent Comments

Rating: 0.0

A crackless carapace, pale and blue
as the ocean that swarms around him,
he glides like a sailboat along
the guileless waves; he leaves
...
Read full text

Caroline Misner
COMMENTS
Safina Leigh Tamerlaine 21 April 2008

Caroline, your poem is really good! You have very unique and intriguing imagery. Keep writing!

0 0 Reply
Close
Error Success