Friday, March 2, 2007

Sea Of Time Comments

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The water washes over me
The waves of passing years
A sea that fell from heaven high
A lake of angel tears.
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Ben Gieske 01 July 2007

'This Sea of Time is evermore Its depths shall never end' So true this is. An excellent choice of comparison with time. I could spend all the time looking at the ocean and never begin to fathom its meanings and yet feel like no time has passed.

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R. S. Farris 02 March 2007

This one has a natural 'ebb and flow' feeling, and the rhymes sound effortless (though I'm sure they weren't) . Nice work!

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