Saturday, October 20, 2007

Sea Of Souls Comments

Rating: ★3.5

Sunlight dances joyously upon an ocean of souls
That frollick and play carelessly amongst the white capped rolls
The chatter, and laugh, and gossip endlessly
Their past lives forgotten as they wreak havoc in eternity
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Fiona Burgess
ocean forgotten
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Goldy Locks 20 October 2007

too many words, in this; meaning, description gets bogged down & overlooked. best care SusxGLx

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Fiona Burgess

Fiona Burgess

South Africa
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