Sea Of Sand Comments

Ah, another fine piece, Jim. Love the rhyming format you've chosen. Left me with a hollow feeling of loneliness and despair. As always, you do this so well!

Jim...great to find this work of yours given my scarce attendance on PH. very glad to see you are still posting...this, no less, another superb piece. your ability to invoke tangible depth within (generally) undefinable measures is what is most admirable for me. your meter is no less than pocketable as is your form and flow...and in that vein...thanks for the (undeserved) note...whats yours is yours and enjoyable. -Tailor