Monday, March 21, 2005

Sea Of Love Comments

Rating: 5.0

Tides of this lust
Sent crashing into bodies
Into pools of sex
Animals, demons, angels, fish
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Meredith Fahey
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Herbert Nehrlich1 27 March 2005

Don't worry, Meredith, it's a good poem. Some people just cannot stand the thought that there are talented people out there. Interesting that your poem should trigger a laughing spell, don't tell your mental health advisor Reynolds. It's a sign. H Did you read my 'bad ' poem along similar lines, only much longer. I used salty sweetness as well. And other things.

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Janice M Pickett 22 March 2005

Wow Meredith. Thats some poem. WELL DONE I gave you a 10 Hugs Jan

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Meredith Fahey

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