Sea Of Hate! Comments

nice pace to your poem keep up the rhythm and good work

my sea comes to make the vines from his heart M

'The sea of love is dead! it has been contaminated with waters of hatred'... liked this stanza more...well, how can love thrive in the dead (hatred) sea? good poem...very much emotionally expressive

this one is intersting, and that is all i can seem to say about it

this piece is expressing strong emotion or expresses hard feelings...nicely done.expresssive...

this is the most amazing wonderufl well expressed beautifully evil poem i have read in an extremely long time. it's refreshing, let me tell. i love the way you make the words fit together, like life's just one big puzzle and ur putting it together. love it.