Ten million people each with their problems
Why should anyone care?
They would only stop to gawk or stare
I see the city lights all around me
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I really enjoyed reading this. Well organized and developed. I like what your getting at. Great read.
I like this, especially your second stanza. I like the idea of cancer eating one's sanity; that's a really strong image. Well done.
Very good imagery. I love the line 'All alone in an ocean of beating hearts'
Life can most definely be a sea of faces. Good imagery. Hugs Jan
The opening thre lines drew me in right away. Great read I felt like I was there in the crowd just behind you.