Tuesday, May 21, 2013

Sea Of Discontent~ Comments

Rating: 5.0

It was an envious night
All tattered in green
The two-eyed monster - disturbed
Feeling it's ragefull & mean;
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Theodora (Theo) Onken
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Theodora Onken 23 May 2013

Glad you liked this David. This really wasn't about stormy weather though!

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Theodora Onken 23 May 2013

Thank you David. Glad you liked this; actually this really wasn't a write about the weather but more the the mood of this time;

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David Wood 23 May 2013

We don't seem to get really stormy weather these days. At least here in Swansea. Perhaps its climate change. Lovely poem. Have you read any of my sonnets yet?

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Theodora Onken 21 May 2013

Gajanan, Thank you. Glad you liked it.

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Gajanan Mishra 21 May 2013

very good one, powerful. thanks. I invite you to read my poems and comment.

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