Sea Love Comments

Well, that sneaked right up on me and smacked me on the head and I deserved it, thinking this was going to be a yawn to read. Brilliant! Heer's the same little fishes that sputter an swim, Wi' the moon's old glim on the grey, wet sand; An' him no more to me mor me to him Than the wind goin' over my hand. - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -LOVE THIS!

In a way this poem sounds like she was writing about an unrequited love for sailor but perhaps she longed for a life at sea...

Very interesting poem.Like to read again and again. Thanks for posting.

Heer's the same little fishes that sputter an swim, Wi' the moon's old glim on the grey, wet sand; An' him no more to me mor me to him Than the wind goin' over my hand. Nice poem. Thanks poet.10.

Little fishes! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

Interesting write. Lovely poem on sea. Enjoyed.

Using the sea to showcase her love its beautiful and creative

Such an awesome poem....