Tuesday, August 6, 2013

Sea Despair Comments

Rating: 5.0

Sometimes on a high tide
certain rules might not abide
returned from land again to ocean
one does not see any plausible reason
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Luciana Isabelle 16 August 2013

wow...wonderfully written! thumbs up!

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Paul Brookes 13 August 2013

another beautifully written rich and vibrant poem even if there is an underlying sadness. Your phrasing is unusual an in 'Making time go stand still ' and well thought out which gives great texture to your writing, Beautiful 10/10 BB : O)

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Dave Walker 06 August 2013

A great poem with a great flow to it.

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