Sometimes on a high tide
certain rules might not abide
returned from land again to ocean
one does not see any plausible reason
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another beautifully written rich and vibrant poem even if there is an underlying sadness. Your phrasing is unusual an in 'Making time go stand still ' and well thought out which gives great texture to your writing, Beautiful 10/10 BB : O)
wow...wonderfully written! thumbs up!