Friday, June 1, 2012

Sea And Sky Comments

Rating: 5.0

Sea - fertile with life aplenty
Sky - sterile with no life to replenish
Sea, turbulent with virulent waves
Sky, tranquil with sailing clouds
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Valsa George
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Kumarmani Mahakul 14 August 2019

Sky lets no bounds Sea, bound within bounds Sea hides mysteries beneath And sky displays them atop. But sea and sky together beget life on Earth.....so touching and true.A beautiful poem on sea and sky is nicely executed.Thanks for sharing.

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Hazel Durham 10 December 2018

A great tribute to the sea and sky, nature's centrepiece and masterpiece! ! Stunning write! !

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Josey Alfred 19 March 2017

True, Life would be extinct, without both.

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Josey Alfred 19 March 2017

True Valsajee, Without both life would be extinct

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Akhtar Jawad 30 August 2015

A thoughtful poem........................................

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Ovi Odiete 15 July 2015

Wow. This is a wonderful poem.

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Queeny Gona 03 June 2015

Wow, wonderful imagery and symmetry drawn between the sky and the sea dear mam. I loved the way it has been drafted dear mam!

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 24 January 2015

Analogy brought out here amazingly........Valsa.......succinct yet great.......10

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