Sea And Sea-Shore Comments
You are the ocean, endless
I am but a tiny grain of sand
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O Dear Sea look- I'm your Sea-Shore I did not love you to decay; to devastate myself my love since your birth O' Sea is true and eternal and eternally you and me shall alive together years after year.! //// excellent eternal love through SEA and SEA-SHORE
The sea and shore have a mystic union from time immemorial! It is ecstatic for the shore to lie cradled by the waves, hearing their sweet lullaby! From a grain of sand you have grown into the vast sea strand! This growth is phenomenal! The sea symbolizes enormity.... so also the sea shore! A great poem!
Thank you Madam Valsa George for your lovely comment.Yes , sea is symbol of immensity and it is ta wonder of creation of God.
This poem expresses so brilliantly our union with the sea and its tides and the linkage to dreams touches my soul.
Thank you Tom Billsborough for reading my poems and kindly giving your valuable comments.
Hi, Bharati! I hope this finds you well. Giving voice to the seashore and sea as you do in this poem is an excellent concept. Cool! -Glen
A fascinatig poem.A grAin of sand connects with all the other sand grains and finally with the ocean through love.
Thank you Kostas Lagos for stopping by and your valuable opinion.Am glad that you liked it.
what views you beget a grain of sand now a beach many come and at your versions leap in one wave all humans you sweep a dance on the sand is due when will you as dew comes up every day dance all your life you may we to your tunes shall play as so many gain inspiration from your versions every day iI do I must say laugh along the beach each day I too am just a speck of minuscule sand on an unknown beach
Thank you Poet Poet for your inspiring words on my poem as well as the wonderful poem you posted on your page. My heart dances in joy.
This poem has superb wisdom in it. Awesome vivid imagery. Great write! I enjoyed reading it.
Beautiful imagery. The sand gradually expanding into a sea shore to eventually grow up big enough to make an embrace is really very interesting.
Many thanks Sri Rajesh Thankappan for reading my poem and giving your valuable opinion.
Hi Bharati, Love poem on love, life’s reality.. true to your style, very expressive. “I take your endlessness In my embrace. “ inimitable. Beautiful...10+++
Awesome drop! ! 'My soul expands To billions and billions sandgrains Uniting with them I become the sea-shore Then I take your endlessness In my embrace. '.... is simply mindblowing. Enjoyed its flow and concept.
Grain of sand the great and mighty sea.. bathing thousand times among waves, dream, endlessness.. you led me through a mystic path dear Bharati..... please write in english.. so that we may all read you.. thnk you always. tony
Thank you Tony Brahmin for reading and giving your valuable opinion.Am so happy to know that appreciation to my poem comes from many great poets of this Site.
Ocean is endless. While we see the sea we feel our eternal father. He is ocean of peace, bliss and happiness. Soul is very tiny but he inherits values from God. Embracing endless wisdom of eternity motivates mind for realizing eternal relationship with God. Seeing sea and seashore and sand particles we feel wonder of his creation. This poem has deep insight and this is very philosophical in nature. This is an excellent poem...10
Thank you Sri Kumaramani Mahakul for your wonderful review of the poem.The vast expanse of the sea, the incessant rise and fall of sea waves breaking against the sea shore evoke emotions of amazement at the wonderful creations of God.When beside the sea one feels his smallness as well as the oneness with the eternity that flows through every tiny particle of nature.
Beautiful poem..sea and seashore, the bond between them, well penned
We live in the sea of eternity on our berth in space, Mother Earth. Your poem washes all grains of sand in this eternity. Well penned. ++10 Robert
Thank you Robert Murray Smith for your inspiring and thoughtful comment.
What a beautiful poem! I can see a great sea, sea shore where your poetic thoughts are utterly merged with sublime ecstasy! Captivating poetic beauty! 10
Thank you Dillip for reading and commenting on this poem just after I posted.It is such a great inspiration.
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This is easily and quickly recognized as a Bharati poem! ! ! It is intelligent, it is full of sensitive and memorable imagery and it is a valuable read! 10+++++++++++++++++++ and on my fav list
Hi Susan Williams, Like your poems, your comments are always inspiring.Many many thanks for reading my poems and your invaluable words.