Wednesday, September 5, 2012

Sea And Sand, The Fall Of Land Comments

Rating: 5.0

See me here, standing tall
Waiting for my fatal fall
Not the trip that lands the cut on the knee
But the fall that man and beast alike flee
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Rebecca Pepper
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Abdallah Gamal 06 September 2012

Speechless! ! Amazing rhyme scheme, in addition to the well-chosen words. It only needs a little tune to keep it moving fluently. Keep up the good work.

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