Saturday, April 28, 2018

Sea Comments

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Mind is an ocean
Waves always on the top
Calm at the bottom
Even strange events always
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Shelvakumari Thachayil
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Robert Murray Smith 28 April 2018

An imaginative poem. I'm so pleased that you focussed on the mind. It is my favourite subject. Overall, I think your poem is to be commended with ++++10.

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Shelvakumari Thachayil

Shelvakumari Thachayil

Kozhikode, Kerala
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