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an original Scroll/ well written poem Ahmad... 10+ Thanks For Sharing!

Maybe we are all ghosts in the persons of history but a shipwrecked soul such romance.

i like the first verse....by itself.... as a whole poem.....just that verse alone stands by itself.....

which one of us is meaner? i think it was the blind princess, great write.

I love the starting point, 'the blind princess plucked the black lute', very imaginative...well done my friend.

Though brief the poem has immediately taken one to the climax! An impatient expression I believe!

'blind princess plucked the black lute / hes prayers were suspended in midair / blue boat made its way across the Persian gulf / through a floating blanket of drowned magnolias...' words of magic coming from you, Ahmad. May your pen continue to blossom.

another gd on sir i luv it so much 10+++++

Another cracker....Ahmad Ruthie

first of all i'd like to thank you very much....Umm i don't know what can i say but great poem coz you are the writer and thank you very much...

I like the question of who was meaner.

A great scroll 3! Quite enjoyable!

Good poem and a good tribute to Nader. Thanks Lynn