Thursday, October 8, 2009

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solitary servant raised her eyes to see
who was walking along Volga river
in the shade of frozen fortress
muted priest read a book of exorcism
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Ahmad Shiddiqi
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Philosophy of a DewyFlower 05 November 2009

a precious dedication to Luwi/

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Catrina Heart 22 October 2009

Stupendous poetry written my dear......well done! ! !

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Anthony Foster 21 October 2009

A solitary servant as the witness, a party and compasionate guests. Such poetry love it.

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Almedia Knight-Oliver 15 October 2009

Another great poem Ahmad.

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Prince Obed de la Cruz 12 October 2009

'if you had told the lie not me or that mere listeners or any one in the carnival would have adored you as much as we did' wow!

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Louis Rams 11 October 2009

another masterpiece in the works.

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Noel Horlanda 11 October 2009

well crafted, full of deep thoughts...cheers

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Vinod Kumar 10 October 2009

nice work dear poet, Era`s changed the names as St`Peter`s Berg, Lenin Gard etc. etc, The river is same to offered the surviving facillities for everyone, to celeberate, thanks.

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Obinna Eruchie 09 October 2009

A very beautiful innovative tribute to a friend, its words are enchanting.

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Christina Phan 09 October 2009

inspiration poem and another fanastic job 10++ your poems are so amazing keep writing gd one

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Fay Slimm 09 October 2009

An inspired collection and this one is my favourite Ahmad - - first rate imagery and sets a very dreamy yet mystical scene....10 + ++ Fay

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Ruth Walters 09 October 2009

They're all good Ahmad but this one is really good and could the beginning of the first chapter of a book..... very interesting.... Ruthie

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Joseph Poewhit 08 October 2009

Words hold a mystic romance

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Subbaraman N V 08 October 2009

It is indeed a nice creation!

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Lynn Glover 08 October 2009

A very good tribute to a friend, and a good poem. Thanks, Lynn

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Ahmad Shiddiqi

Ahmad Shiddiqi

Semarang, Central Java, Indonesia
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