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written from the heart well deserving of a ten

Beautiful and precious..

each note was an act of grateful for the moments stolen from the heart lovely to read!

Very Beautiful Love Story... And The Setting Is Awesome... The Pyramid (Oh! Yes) ... And The Mornful Sound of a Lone Oboe... The Atmosphere was set for Romance! ... Nicely Done Ahmad... Great Write... MoonBee

Always the masked warriors try to destroy the aims of love.

Very graceful employments of words that tell a unique story. God bless us all-MJG.

A sweet poem dedicated to a friend-how lucky she is to have such sweet words spoken in her name. a 10

Some spelling errors, but none-the-less interesting...very inspiring..

Awwwwww! That is so so so sweet! :) i loved this poem! and i'm glad i found my name in it! Thanks so much!

'each note was an act of grateful for the moments stolen from the heart the melody carried as deep as it had to and achieved a supernatural resonance' great! .........................

this is beautiful and well written

This piece is well intend, a story of love and romance written in a very unique way, different from others. It needs deep analysis in order to get the point andf that makes the difference.10+

Exciting, melodious and mysterious.10.

Nice to read this poem! Interesting to read further1

This part is especially meaningful for me. a solo oboe was serenading Winter nights singing the same ballade again and again

'splendor of sun was just starting / to shine the Pyramid's darkest chambers / love we are about to search / it now has its own masked warriors...' beautiful as usual that remains so.

thts was so sweet and very lovely poem i enjoy it very much 10+ keep it up sir

each note was an act of grateful for the moments stolen from the heart the melody carried as deep as it had to and achieved a supernatural resonance this very nice i liked it all ahmed and keep it up...

Very, very lovely.Beautiful.

The pyramids bring a spark to the words