Wednesday, September 5, 2012

Scripted Desire Comments

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I'm afraid
My expectations for love are too great

That when I finally get a chance
I'll be left disappointed with my circumstance
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Aria Siren
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Alla Simone 15 September 2012

I like this. It's human and honest. Fav. lines: Clinging to an idea Rather than reality. Wanting to jump into a movie. And feel the same fire. Pretending it's not scripted desire. Thanks for sharing.

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Tiger Lily Love 06 September 2012

Very good poem Aria, it touched me in ways i can't describe, keep up the good work you are an excellent writer.

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