Tuesday, July 10, 2012

Scribbles On The Sand Comments

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I watch a little crab a'crawling
Along the briny sand of an abandoned beach
His footprints are so fragile and quite fleeting
Obliterated soon by wind and rising tide
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Liilia Talts Morrison
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Captain Cur 10 July 2012

This scratch on the sand will not soon be obliterated, I can assure you of that. So if this is what your scribble looks like I can't wait to see the perfect poem. But in the mean time keep scratching the sand. Great Job, I enjoyed the poem!

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