Wednesday, January 25, 2012

Screw You.. Comments

Rating: 5.0

I've seen more of you dissapear than I ever got to know..
Your mood swings from high to so sadly low..
Feeling so lucky when I catch you being glad..
But sometimes it seems that my presence is enough to get you mad..
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Rick Adriolo
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Patricia Grantham 17 October 2014

An interesting write of a love gone wrong. To the point and yes love goes on. Long live the writer of this poem!

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Sara Fielder 26 January 2012

Good poem Rick. Disgust is a powerful emotion, and I think you've nailed it here.

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Victoria Gauci 26 January 2012

Bam! Put it out there Darlin'. Way to go! There have been times when I have felt the same way. Good job! You've expressed yourself so truly.

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Subodh Pandey 26 January 2012

right from bottom of heart. some are like that only. nice write.

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