Tuesday, May 6, 2014

Screen Door Comments

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He waits by the screen door
Unsure if he's ready to leave
Tempted by what could be out there
Looming in a lazy mid morning
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Susan Lacovara
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Kelly Kurt 20 March 2015

I imagined an anxious dog or a six year old boy, being able to see out the screen door but not open it without your help. Trapped inside, waiting, but not willing to set forth without you. I enjoyed this very much. Thank you for sharing. Parenthetically, quite different from my poem of the same title.: -)

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Steve Lang 07 May 2014

Really liked this; proof there is beauty in simplicity and honesty. Totally intimidated by 196 poems in your catalogue!

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Susan Lacovara

Susan Lacovara

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