Tuesday, July 1, 2008

Screams Comments

Rating: 5.0

'You're pulling me apart! ' she screamed,
unable to control herself,
her entire life,
she had been tortured,
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Sandra jacks
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Sandy nobody 01 July 2008

abuse is always sad and scarey..good poem sandra...keep writing

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Bobbie Jo ..... 01 July 2008

wow i like it...are u done with it? just sayin...i think u could add more to it to make it longer and have a good ending...but ither way its good...btw it gave me chills. :)

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