Sunday, November 15, 2009

Screaming Comments

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In a small house…
full of candles which are burning and coloring the sky with the colors of the rainbow…
there is a beautiful girl in her wedding's dress…
she is full of happiness and sweet dreams with her lovely guy…
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i say one day the sky would Boom aloud and god would decend and all the innocent would be aquited. but all the guilty would pay.... im sorry about this.. tell you what.. everything must come to end... all dies but things directly of God... again. im sorry..

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Kranthi Pothineni 16 November 2009

Painful truth is captured in this write. Sad theme, boldly expressed.

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Sara Nicola 15 November 2009

shame on me too many times having little awareness of cultural issues-at times it is easy to find self caught up in what need not be. Thank You for these words. Please do not reply or find way to what i have written. Not poetry -but anger.

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