Screaming Silence Comments

cool. i never seen a poem written so good by kind of repeating itself. good job.

Nothing to say but: WOW

beautiful. a good effort to capture the echoe and sounds of silence. keep writing.

yeah i mean that was a pretty good poem I really liked it Miss Cruz

awsome..yeah u should keep writing

wonderful work. i agree with mary keep writing.

Hi Ananda. This is loaded with fresh angles. The idea is clever and you've made good use of it by not overdoing it. And there's a theme there that the reader can understand and identify with. Fine writing all round. (I'll message you later with a suggestion for one little change) . The best to you, jim xx

Awesome! You should write more. A good piece. Wish you all the best.Take care.

and i love the last line..if these are your first fruits i'm really looking forward to more

A very great poem. Especially A million feelings in just one heart. Very nice

I love the third stanza the best! I think that gives the ssence of the poem! Hugs, Dee

So many ideas in one single poem-really excellent.