Screaming Silence Comments

The edge of each word is palpable.I really enjoyed this poem.Thank you

painful to read though, the poem powerfully presents the theme there in...most fitting title...good piece, Wendy...10

a strong theme there, well written

Your poem still haunts me! it is soooo powerful

I hear your cry, i feel your pain, you gave all, to obtain I'm so sorry! for your virgin heart, I'm sorry you were torn apart I'm sorry for being a male, lies, deceit an endless tale not all men think this way, believe me pet! should mans life fail don't loose your trust, think of the best, you've learned your lesson like all the rest I'm no stranger to the broken heart, I've lived a life that's torn apart keep writing, let us hear you voice, write your poetry! let us rejoice regards Bob