Tuesday, May 25, 2010

Screaming Inside Comments

Rating: 5.0

Inside I can't see
I can't see the things around me
Inside I can't think
I can't think to know who's hurting me
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Samantha Heron
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Angela Michel 25 May 2010

Wow. I like the way you used the repetion of the word inside. very intense emotion so perfectly captured. Wow.

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