Scream Silently Comments

This breaks my heart. It is so vivid the pain jumps off the page. One senses the pain and/or anger even more with the capitols, picturing you pounding with frustration on the keys..It deserves a 10 for emotion alone...The numbers given you are way off the mark..Hang in there now. Marci.M.

Don't like this one. I does nothing for me. I would scrap it. But that's just me. Someone else may love it.

1. Very bad. The whole CAPITALIZED PSEUDOSHOUTING bit should not be used by anyone over the age of fourteen. If you look past that (and it is nearly impossible to) , you are merely telling us about our problem. Show us, with original details.

A very nice description of introversion/social anxiety. I think a lot of people can relate!