Monday, August 4, 2008

Scream For Silence Comments

Rating: 5.0

Hear my words through my lovely hands,
The sound of silence of this gory land;
Deafen us not with your violent guns,
Treat us not as a homeless vagabonds.
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Juneil Sechico
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Fay Slimm 14 August 2008

A true heartfelt appeal versed and rhymed very well. This is an example of well thought-out and sustained subject matter Juneil. It has my ten without a doubt. Please go carefully over spelling errors if you can and edit because this piece is worth it. Best wishes Fay who is a GAL by the way - not a fella....! Ha ha.

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Juneil Sechico

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