Scream As They Are Stolen Comments

great efforts applied in maintaining the rhyme scheme, I appreciate it :)

beautifully told, and eloquent - - the rhyme scheme is great, and guides you through the poem very nicely. 9++

ray, groovy story. true? i wonder. i like to think my first drafts are the best but luckily i often make little changes. i'll look at one more of your poems now before i get on with other stuff. eternal stairwell....i like it! bri edwards