Friday, May 28, 2010

Scream Comments

Rating: 4.0

Sometimes I want to scream
I want to be set free
I used to cry out and yell
So my problems would fall
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Hope Elizabeth
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Ben Harper 10 July 2010

i can really feel your emotion in this piece it llike your letting it out through your writting. good work

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Maya (ayam) Armstrong 06 June 2010

This this wonderful. I think this is one of your best poems. I'm not the best writer but I know a good poem when I see one. I do see any need of changing a word in this poem.

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