Tuesday, October 9, 2007

Scottish Sky - Haiku Comments

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Alice Anne Gordon
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Leonard Daranjo 09 October 2007

How well you have brought out magic of a Scottish Sky which, today, I can say I have seen - with my mind's eye.Thanks to seventeen syllables of pure magic. The lyrical rhythm of the Haiku along with key descriptive words, removed from their wrappers, bring out the magic of this natural phenomenon. When you look at something like this It is just one of those things happening in the sky But look more closely and you will find That it is different - totally different When you look at it With the inner eye Take care...

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