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The life of my score board read
Oh no
The score board of my life said
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Your knowledge of scientific matters and current events are very ably mixed with mixed feelings from you. I liked the idea that pains of the worlds are your pains. But we may not live peacefully even for a second when things are happening so violently by the fury of the nature and the nature of the human-beings. Nice poem to contemplate.
a very good poem...an insight into the lifestyle of ours...we rarely come across our true selves..as liars.as scarred and scarry with so many gains and pains...we are so distracted from our true selves...a great poem